Part of a Story

Hey all! Just posting a paragraph of a story I have been working on. Comment on it please!

Kessa’s soon-to-be counselor Mr. Sorenson was looking at her chart. The Middle school entry was strange, but even stranger than that was that there was no Elementary school entry. Mr. Sorenson looked everywhere around the world to find out what Elementary school Kessa had attended, and didn’t find anything. He even considered the possibility that Kessa had been home schooled, but he didn’t find any information on that either. No birth certificates were discovered too. According to the world, Kessa Bylake didn’t exist until she enrolled at Stevensberry Middle School at the age of twelve.